On Thursday, I worked on my paper some more. In the process of incorporating what I previously wrote down in my journal, I started making changes, and rethinking/contemplating some of the comments one of my group members made in the past. I want to make my paper as clear as possible, and I see some areas where I need to elaborate. Just like prayer is "a process" so is this paper which discusses prayer (Murray,"Teach Writing as a Process Not Product" 3).
Right now, I am just going to review what I have. I haven't really been talking to anyone about my paper lately. I want to talk to my dad again. I loved our conversation the last time we spoke. I look forward to what Dr. Zamora and my group members have to say as well.